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Kk Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Sentence questions. Thank you

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00I am not sure whether these two sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics. 02br
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001.00It is better for people to understand the characters and values of a society not by observing the way its people look and dress but by the way its people act. 02br
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002. It is both people’s outward appearance and dress style that have little to do with their society’s value system.02br
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003.When interviewees dress smart and have a neat face, they have more confidence to show their capacity for this job. 02br
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004.What people should put on is dependent on what occasion they attend or what kind of job they do.. 02br
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005.00The different stages of Taiwan’s economic development show that the traits of its people are noted for diligence, aggression and ambition. 02br
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006.00The majority of people participated in the political reform movement against totalitarian government for the sake of political freedom and human rights.02br
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It is better to understand the characters and values of a society by observing not the way its people look and dress but by the way its people act. ("For people" is redundant here). 02br 02br 002.

  • It is better to understand the characters and values of a society by observing not the way its people look and dress but by the way its people act.
  • ("For people" is redundant here).
  • 02br 02br 002.
  • Both people's outward appearance and dress style have little to do with their society’s value system.
  • 02br 02br 003.
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01.It is better to understand the characters and values of a society by observing not the way its people look and dress but by the way its people act. ("For people" is redundant here). 02br
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002. Both people's outward appearance and dress style have little to do with their society’s value system. (The use of a cleft sentence sounds awkward).02br
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