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Yeah, giving James terrible tickets and then screening his call was just not nice! And then not even caring/care about losing a Seinfeld reunion? If word got out about that, he'd definitely lose his job.

He was meant to go free. That was the deal. Now he's goes free of everything but the scar on his head.

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Yeah, giving James terrible tickets and then screening his call was just not nice! And then not even caring about missing a Seinfeld reunion? If word got out about that, he'd definitely lose his job.

— Mister Micawber

  • Yeah, giving James terrible tickets and then screening his call was just not nice!
  • And then not even caring about missing a Seinfeld reunion?
  • If word got out about that, he'd definitely lose his job.
  • He was meant to go free.
  • That was the deal.
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Yeah, giving James terrible tickets and then screening his call was just not nice! And then not even caring about missing a Seinfeld reunion? If word got out about that, he'd definitely lose his job.

He was meant to go free. That was the deal. Now he goes free of everything but the scar on his head.
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Why is it caring in the first sentence?
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It seems to be more appropriate to 'giving' and 'screening'. The sentence is a fragment, so there is no way to judge its grammar independently.
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