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001. 01i00How could there be more than 30 million people infected with a lethal virus, and01u00 I not know02u00 even one of them?02i00 -- I think the underlined part would be if written fully, "could I not know even one of them"; but could it be written like this too? "couldn't I know even one of them"02br
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01i00How could there be more than 30 million people infected with a lethal virus, and 01u00couldn't I know02u00 even one of them?02i02br
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01i00How could there be more than 30 million people infected with a lethal virus, and01u00 could I not know02u00 even one of them? --02i00 I think almost identical to the original but used the optional 'could'. 02br
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002.01i00The next day, World AIDS Day, Rick put a shaking, terrified David under the waters of baptism.02i00 -- I have doubts about using words like waters or depths or heavens. I think the last one refers to stellar bodies or something similar to that; but depths? Possibly connotes the existence of more than a single depth? I think so. Waters? I think it would make sense if we are talking about many bodies of water like a lake, pond, or even seas in different parts of the world. 0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 001. 02i 00 -- I think the underlined part would be if written fully, "could I not know even one of them"; but could it be written like this too? 02br 02br 01b 00How could I not know02b 00 even one of them?

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 001.
  • 02i 00 -- I think the underlined part would be if written fully, "could I not know even one of them"; but could it be written like this too?
  • 02br 02br 01b 00How could I not know02b 00 even one of them?
  • 02br 02br 00The main problem with your versions is that you are omitting the 'how'.
  • 02br 02br 01font 01i 00How could there be more than 30 million people infected with a lethal virus, and01u 00 could I not know02u 00 even one of them?
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0Hi,02br
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01font001. 01i00How could there be more than 30 million people infected with a lethal virus, and01u00 I not know02u00 even one of them?02i00 -- I think the underlined part would be if written fully, "could I not know even one of them"; but could it be written like this too? "couldn't I know
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001-- Your suggested alternatives do not work. 01i00How could there be X and01b00 [how could I]02b00 not know?02i00 Elisions have their limits.02br
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002-- 01i00Waters of baptism02i00 would be more mundanely grammatical as 01i00baptismal water02i00, but I think

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