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I am not sure if these sentence are right or not in terms of its grammar, word choice, and semantics. If you find something wrong, please help me edit them. Thank you very much.
1. The government and rebels’ army fought with each other in a way that they badly ruined the country’s infrastructure including all basic transport, power, and water supplies that were razed to the ground
2. In an attempt to make a profit as much as possible, all genetically modified food companies try to obtain their patents on their seeds, as does music industry.
I am not sure if these sentence are right or not in terms of its grammar, word choice, and semantics. If you find something wrong, please help me edit them. Thank you very much.
1. The government and rebels’ army fought with each other in a way that they badly ruined the country’s infrastructure including all basic transport, power, and water supplies that were razed to the ground
2. In an attempt to make a profit as much as possible, all genetically modified food companies try to obtain their patents on their seeds, as does music industry.
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The government and rebel armies fought so fiercely that the country's infrastructure was left in ruins. All basic transport ceased to function, and power plants and water supply installations were razed to the ground. In an attempt to make as much profit as possible, all companies that produce genetically modified foods try to obtain patents on their seeds.
- The government and rebel armies fought so fiercely that the country's infrastructure was left in ruins.
- All basic transport ceased to function, and power plants and water supply installations were razed to the ground.
- In an attempt to make as much profit as possible, all companies that produce genetically modified foods try to obtain patents on their seeds.
- The practice of obtaining patents is also used in the music business.
- CJ
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The government and rebel armies fought so fiercely that the country's infrastructure was left in ruins. All basic transport ceased to function, and power plants and water supply installations were razed to the ground.
In an attempt to make as much profit as possible, all companies that produce genetically modified foods try to obtain patents on their seeds. The practice of obtai
In an attempt to make as much profit as possible, all companies that produce genetically modified foods try to obtain patents on their seeds. The practice of obtai
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