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I am not sure if these sentence are right or not in terms of their grammar, word choice, and semantics. If you find something wrong, please help me edit them. Thank you very much.

1. Wang wn ti composed this song, mother’s named called Taiwan, which tells a hopeless situation in which Taiwanese suffered the bitter fate of how ruthlessly suppressive the dictator, Chiang Chieh-shih, ruled them

2. The more seriously Taiwan’s people struggle with their survival in the international community, the more actively they try to express their suppressed and sorrowful feelings toward the rest of the world.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

Please do not copy and paste in bold, **** Chun-- then I cannot highlight the changes I have made-- and I have made many below:

1. **** wn ti [this name seems misspelt] composed this song, mother’s named called Taiwan [*I don't understand this phrase-- is it the name of the song or ****'s mother or both?*], which tells of a hopeless situation in which the Taiwanese suffered the bitter fate of ruthless suppression at the hands of the dictator, Chiang Chieh-shih, who ruled them.

2. The more earnestly Taiwan’s people struggle for their survival in the international community, the more actively they try to express to the rest of the world their suppressed feelings of sorrow.

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1. Wang wn ti composed this song, mother’s named called Taiwan, which tells a hopeless situation in which Taiwanese suffered the bitter fate of how ruthlessly suppressive the dictator, Chiang Chieh-shih, ruled them

2. The more seriously Taiwan’s people struggle with their survival in the international community, the more actively they try to express their suppressed and sorrowful feelings toward the rest of the world.

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1. **** wn ti [this name seems misspelt] composed this song, mother’s named called Taiwan [*I don't understand this phrase-- is it the name of the song or ****'s mother or both?*], which tells of a hopeless situation in which the Taiwanese suff

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1. Wang wn ti composed this song, mother’s named called Taiwan, which tells a hopeless situation in which Taiwanese suffered the bitter fate of how ruthlessly suppressive the dictator, Chiang Chieh-shih, ruled them

2. The more seriously Taiwan’s people struggle with their survival in the international community, the more actively they try to express their suppressed and sorrowful feelings toward the rest of the world.

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1. **** wn ti [this name seems misspelt] composed this song, mother’s named called Taiwan [I don't understand this phrase-- is it the name of the song or ****'s mother or both?], which tells of a hopeless situation in which the Taiwanese suff

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1. **** wn ti [this name seems misspelt] composed this song, mother’s named called Taiwan [*I don't understand this phrase-- is it the name of the song or ****'s mother or both?*], which tells of a hopeless situation in which the Taiwanese suff