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I am not sure if this sentence is right or not in terms of its grammar, word choice, and semantics. If you find something wrong, please help me edit them. Thank you very much.

Martin Luther staged the non-violent movement throughout the whole country in a way that civil rights activists and supporters were united to attack oppressor's will and sense of right and wrong, accelerating the process of the ending racial segregation.

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I am not sure if this sentence is right or not in terms of its grammar, word choice, and semantics. If you find something wrong, please help me edit them. Thank you very much.

Martin Luther King staged the non-violent movement throughout the whole country in a way that civil rights activists and supporters were united to attack oppressor's will and sense of right and wrong, accelerating the process of the ending racial segregation.
Martin Luther and Matrin Luther King are two very different people. Make sure you name the right one.

I would use organise, not staged.

"in such a way"

"to attack oppressor's will and sense of right and wrong" makes no logical sense. Do you perhaps mean to say "to attack oppression and the views of right and wrong"?

"the process to end racial segregation".

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Martin Luther staged the non-violent movement throughout the whole country in a way that civil rights activists and supporters were united to attack oppressor's will and sense of right and wrong, accelerating the process of the ending racial segregation.

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