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I am not sure if these sentence are right or not in terms of its grammar, word choice, and semantics. If you find something wrong, please help me edit them. Thank you very much.

1. Mass media have a powerful influence over the way people think about the aspects of their lives, especially when they don’t know what to do for their career development. At this moment, mass media can make them obedient to their opinions, becoming conformists rather than risk takers.

2. It is very difficult to challenge those with a great power, such as president, opinion leaders, and experts. Although their subordinates know their bosses’ decisions are unwise, most of them keep silent in the meeting, reach an unanimous consensus and follow their instructions to the letter because they are afraid to not to support their bosses.

3. Meek and compliant subordinates can’t usually give their boss sound and sensible advice, causing their boss to make a bit of a blunder

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**** CHUNI am not sure if these sentence are right or not in terms of its grammar, word choice, and semantics. If you find something wrong, please help me edit them. Thank you very much.

1. The m*** media have[Although "media" is technically plural, it has become accepted as a portmanteau word, so usually is treated as singular >> "has"] a powerful influence over the way people think about all aspects of their lives, especially when they don’t know what to do for their career development. At this moment, mass media can make them ~~obedient to their opinions,~~ ~~becoming~~ conformists rather than risk takers.

2. It is very difficult to challenge those with a great power, such as presidents, opinion leaders, and experts. Although ~~their~~ subordinates may know their bosses’ decisions are unwise, most of them keep silent in meetings, reach a unanimous consensus and follow their instructions to the letter because they are afraid to not to support their bosses.

3. Meek and compliant subordinates can’t usually give their bosses sound and sensible advice, causing their bosses to make ~~a bit of a blunder~~ mistakes

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1. Mass media have a powerful influence over the way people think about the aspects of their lives, especially when they don’t know what to do for their career development. At this moment, mass media can make them obedient to their opinions, becoming conformists rather than risk takers.

3. Meek and compliant subordinates can’t usually give their boss sound and sensible advice, causing their boss to make a bit of a blunder

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1. The m*** media have[Although "media" is technically plural, it has become accepted as a portmanteau word, so usuall

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