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Bsss10 Posted 19 years ago
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001.What impressed me most was that an Israeli professor got his body to block the killer’s way at the class’s door in order to give his students several seconds to break windows and jump down on the first floor from the class.02br
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002. Teachers could treat their students as their own children in a crisis during which they would rather save their students at the expense of their lives than let them get hurt. 02br
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02font 02br 02br 01font 002. Teachers could treat their students as their own children in a crisis during which they would rather save their students at the expense of their lives than let them get hurt. 02br 02br 002.

— Clive

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  • Teachers could treat their students as their own children in a crisis during which they would rather save their students at the expense of their lives than let them get hurt.
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  • Some teachers may treat their students as their own children in a crisis, during which they would rather save their students at the expense of their lives than let them get hurt.
  • 02br 02br 01font 00I also read about this heroic elderly man who gave his life to save his students.
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01font001.What impressed me most was that an Israeli professor got his body to block the killer’s way at the class’s door in order to give his students several seconds to break windows and jump down on the first floor from the class.02font02br
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0 These are called run on sentences and are too long. The reader looses the meaning of the sentence by the end. To check the flow of a sentence always read it out loud to yourself to hear how it sounds. If you can't get through it comfortable it is too long or it needs punctuation. 0-
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0 00This is how I would write them:02br
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00 1.What impressed me most was that an Israeli professor used his body to block the killer’s way at the classroom's door. This gave his students several seconds to break windows and jump down from the first floor classroom.02br
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