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Adonis Posted 20 years ago
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001. Because Taiwan's government didn't withhold any information on SARS for the public and WHO, SARS claimed a fewer people's live than WHO expected. 02br
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003. In order to get the operating license, some high polluted owners factories bribed some KMT legislators to deliberately withhold the fact that some chemicals these factories emitted were detrimental to people's health from the public0-
  

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12pre 12br 12br 101. Because Taiwan's government didn't withhold any information on SARS for the public and WHO, SARS claimed a fewer people's live than WHO expected. 12br 12br 102.

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  • Because Taiwan's government didn't withhold any information on SARS for the public and WHO, SARS claimed a fewer people's live than WHO expected.
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  • 00 00The sentences need some context and logic improvement and I made some changes for your reference.
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