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00The writer claims that since private contributions to the Symphony increased by 200 percent last year, it can survive without receiving government’s subsidy. However, the writer does not consider that if the Symphony received 100 US dollars the year before last, it just received 200 US dollars last year, which couldn’t help it so much. 02br
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— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00The writer claims that01font 00,02font 00 since private contributions to the Symphony increased by 200 percent last year01font 00,02font 00 it can survive without receiving 01font 00a 02font 01font 00government02font 00 subsidy.
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  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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