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WANG CHUN Posted 20 years ago
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00I am not sure whether theese sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics. 02br
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001.What helps Appledaily finds its market niche is a group of media managers and experienced journalists who spend one year on market study.02br
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002. Mozart is a prodigy child. By the age of five, his imagination and creativity enabled him to write remarkable symphonies that were better than other musicians. 5702br
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003.00What is the best way to receive high education is that all students should schedule a variety of academic disciplines as a part of their class programs other than their major’s core curriculum.02br
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004. I find it useful to read Analects of Confucius, which helps me sharpen my critical thinking and analytical ability. It enables me to look at a range of social problems in perceptive, and find the true causes behind these issues. 6402br
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0Hi,02br 02br 00I've tried to keep your words as much as possible. 02font 02br 02br 01font 002. Mozart was a child prodigy.

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00I've tried to keep your words as much as possible.
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  • Mozart was a child prodigy.
  • By the age of five, his imagination and creativity enabled him to write remarkable symphonies that were better than those of other musicians.
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0Hi,02br
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00I've tried to keep your words as much as possible. This is pretty good English.02br
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00Best wishes, Clive02br
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01font001.What helps Appledaily finds its market niche is a group of media managers and experienced journalists who spent one year on a market study.02font02br
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0Sorry for butting is, but shouldn't it be "What helps Apple daily fin01b00d02b00 its etc..."?02br
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00And I have a question: what does "in perceptive" mean here? I've never seen that adjective used in that way... Thanks!0-
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00"shouldn't it be "What helps Apple daily fin01b00d02b00 its etc..."? 01font00I beleive so.02font0-
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1font00 By the age of five, his imagination and creativity enabled him 02font02br
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00Maybe, It does not nessesarily have to be "01font00 02font00By the age of five, his imagination and creativity 01font00had02font00 enabled him ..", does it? [:^)]
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00Yes. Should be 'find', not 'finds'. 02br
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00'In perceptive' should be 'in perspective'. That's what I mistakenly read it as.02br
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00I apologize for my carelessness.02br
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00Now, for 'By the age of five, his imagination . . . enabled him to write symphonies...' If he wrote them before
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01cite10Clive12cite10Yes. Should be 'find', not 'finds'. 12br
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10'In perceptive' should be 'in perspective'. That's what I mistakenly read it as.12br
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10Best wishes, Clive12br
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10Nothing to worry about, Clive... It's so much easier to rea

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