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Kk Posted 20 years ago
1. Whether television can provide the aspects of knowledge as much as books can is contingent on what channel audiences watch.
2. So seriously do activists take their social movements that their goals can be attained.
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1. Whether television can provide the aspects of knowledge as much as books can is contingent on what channel audiences watch.
2. So seriously do activists take their social movements that their goals can be attained.
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Kk 1. Whether television can provide the aspects of knowledge as much as books can is contingent on what channel audiences watch. It's grammatical, but "the aspects of knowledge" is an unexpected phrase.
- Kk 1.
- Whether television can provide the aspects of knowledge as much as books can is contingent on what channel audiences watch.
- It's grammatical, but "the aspects of knowledge" is an unexpected phrase.
- I would reword it: Whether television can provide all of the aspects of knowledge, as do books, is dependent on which channel audiences watch.
- or Whether television can provide as many aspects of knowledge as books, and as thoroughly, is dependent on which channel audiences watch.
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Kk1. Whether television can provide the aspects of knowledge as much as books can is contingent on what channel audiences watch.
It's grammatical, but "the aspects of knowledge" is an unexpected phrase. I would reword it: Whether television can provide all of the aspects of knowledge, as do books, is dependent on which channel audiences wat
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