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Kk Posted 21 years ago
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Sentence questions

Hello,

I am not sure whether the several sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics.

Can you give me a hand with checking them

Thank you for your help

1. There are a lot of motivations to encourage students to get a high grade on the exams.

2. Mots graduate schools of the United States require that international students' TOEFL score over 250.

3. A boss decides whether his company continues to engage an employee based on his job performance.

4. A struggling company chooses to merge another one in order to save personeel' cost, resulting in the large-scale layoff.

5. What parents do most for thier children is education and encouragement.

6. I strongly support that where the decision must be made between supporting arts and environmental protection, the environmnetal protection should take priority.

7. One thing I am able to improve my community is to volunteer to teach English for those who need it most.
  

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Hi, 1. There are a lot of motivations I'd say 'for' rather than 'to encourage' to encourage students to get a high grade on the exams. 2.

  • Hi, 1.
  • There are a lot of motivations I'd say 'for' rather than 'to encourage' to encourage students to get a high grade on the exams.
  • 2.
  • Mo ts graduate schools in the United States require that international students' TOEFL scores be over 250.
  • 3.
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Hi,

1. There are a lot of motivations I'd say 'for' rather than 'to encourage' to encourage students to get a high grade on the exams.

2. Mots graduate schools in the United States require that international students' TOEFL scores be over 250.

3. A boss decides wh
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Clive, if I may? It's "most" in 2., and "their" in 5. Emotion: smile (I know these are typos!)
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Two minor adjustments on Clive's--


4. A struggling company chooses to merge with another one in order to save personnel costs, resulting in large-scale layoffs.


6. I strongly

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