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I am not sure whether the several sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics. 

Can you give me a hand with checking them 

Thank you for your help.

1.If I received some land to use, I would create more green space. The green space is where hundreds of thousands of trees are planted, which benefits long-term environmental protection and enables animals, especially endangered ones, to survive. 

2. With the burgeoning population, construction companies continue to ravage original forests in order to get more available lands to meet the demand for houses, resulting in many species of rare animals to die. 

3.Heavy industries all over the world considerably emit the great amount of carbon dioxide. What is worse, these factories liberate extensive carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, causing global warming and greenhouse effect, which will endanger survival of earth’s creatures.

Jussive · Accepted Answer

'to die' - 'dying'

'lands' - 'land'

'considerably...' - 'emit considerable amounts of'

'earth's' - 'the earth's'

Davkett · Answer

Consider these revisions--

1.If I were to receive some land to use, I would create more green space. Green space, where hundreds of thousands of trees are planted, is beneficial for long-term environmental health, and enables animals, especially endangered ones, to thrive.

2. To meet a burgeoning population's demands for increased land and housing, construction companies continue to ravage original forests, heightening the threat of extinction for many species of rare animals.

3.Heavy industries all over the world emit considerable amounts of carbon dioxide. What is worse, this carbon dioxide accumulates in the earth's atmosphere, causing global warming and the greenhouse effect, which endangers the survival of earth’s creatures.

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