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Hello, 

I am not sure whether the four sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics. 
Can you give me a hand with checking them 
Thank you for your help.

1.To keep the price of a ticket resonable, I oppose entertainers can earn a big salary. In other words, I hope movie fans can think with alacrity to criticize the partial phenomenon why they must pay a prohibitive price of a ticket. 

2.What athletes or entertainers can do is barely confined to please people to watch games or movies rather than make significant influence on young students that educators can make. 

3.My teacher instructed me in anzlyzing the root causes of the problem of property chasm between the rich and the poor.

4.The way the text of some literature cites real or unreal stories to show readers the idea of right and worng illunimates the minds of readers, which enables them to be decent.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

Here are my suggestions. I've tried to change as little as possible. I may have changed some of your meaning, as it wasn't always clear to me.

1.To keep the price of a ticket reasonable, I don't think entertainers should earn a big salary. In other words, I hope movie fans will quickly be able to see this, and will complain because they must pay a prohibitive price for a ticket.

2.What athletes or entertainers can do is not just to make people want to watch games or movies, but rather to have a significant and educational influence on young students.

3.My teacher instructed me in analyzing the root causes of the problem of the property gap between the rich and the poor.

4.The way that the text of some literature cites real or fictional stories to show readers the idea of right and wrong illuminates the minds of readers, which allows them to be decent.

Best wishes, Clive

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