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Kk Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Sentence questions

Hello, 

I am not sure whether the five sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics.

Can you give me a hand with checking them

Thank you for your help.


1. Hardly do children who grow up in a countryside easily obtain a better educational resources to help them dispaly outstanding academic perforance.

2. What the role of a Golden Retriever plays is to protect his master who are blind. AGolden Retriever is considered to be a alert and intellectual the species of he dog, that has the ability to guid his master where to get on a bus or oserve the state of traffic and protect his master from any traffic accident.

3. It is at zoos that animals are able to breed, especially endangered ones.

4. What teachers bring young stusents tozoos, they can mak use of it to educate them why we human beings must treat animals with respect, leading them to begin acting with sympathy toward these rare animals.

5. Confucius brought some doctrines, which enlightens me to think with alacrity. I have the ability to rethink the aggrevated problem of property chasm between the rich and the poor behind real reasons.
  

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Hi, here are my versions. 1. Children who grow up in the country seldom obtain good educational resources that will help them display outstanding academic performance.

  • Hi, here are my versions.
  • 1.
  • Children who grow up in the country seldom obtain good educational resources that will help them display outstanding academic performance.
  • 2.
  • A Golden Retriever plays a role to protect his master who is blind.
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Hi, here are my versions.

1. Children who grow up in the country seldom obtain good educational resources that will help them display outstanding academic performance.

2. A Golden Retriever plays a role to protect his master who is blind. Golden Retrievers are considered to be an alert and intellectual species of dog. They have
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Hi Clive,

In sentence #2, shall we use the punctuations as below? If not, would you please explain the reason?

They have the ability to guide their master to get on the bus,observe the traffic, and protect their master from traffic accidents.
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Hi,

... shall we use the punctuations as below? If not, would you please explain the reason?

They have the ability to guide their master to get on the bus,observe the traffic, and protect their master from traffic accidents. I would omit the second comma. A comma represents a pause in speech and no pause is required here.
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Makes complete sense ,Clive. Thanks

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