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Kk Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
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Hello,
I am not sure whether the five sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics.
Can you give me a hand with checking them
Thank you for your help.
1. A house is composed of a living room, a kitchen, a garden, studies, toilets, and rooms.
2. The content of novels, prose, poetry or science fiction creates many interesting topics and depicts many virtual characters, which excites my imagination.
3.Compared with a living room, where I just lie on the comfortable sofa and watch the boring television programs, a study gives me an opportunity to enjoy listening to music and reading what I want.
4.I used to surf the Internet in a study, which has a prominent feature of hyperlink, hypertext and database, enabling me to acquire the latest and newest information.
5. Although a living room can gather family to have a good conversation and a kitchen can serve to provide my family with gourmet foods, they don’t mean so much to me.
Top answer
These sentences sound more appropriate: 1. A house is composed of several rooms such as a living room, a kitchen, a garden and toilets. 2.
- These sentences sound more appropriate: 1.
- A house is composed of several rooms such as a living room, a kitchen, a garden and toilets.
- 2.
- The content of novels, prose, poetry or science fiction creates many interesting topics and depicts many virtual characters, which excite my imagination.
- Compared to a living room, where I just lie on a comfortable sofa and watch boring television programs, a study gives me an opportunity to enjoy listening to music and reading what I want.
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These sentences sound more appropriate:
1. A house is composed of several rooms such as a living room, a kitchen, a garden and toilets.
2. The content of novels, prose, poetry or science fiction creates many interesting topics and depicts many virtual characters, which excite my imagination.
3.Compared to a living
1. A house is composed of several rooms such as a living room, a kitchen, a garden and toilets.
2. The content of novels, prose, poetry or science fiction creates many interesting topics and depicts many virtual characters, which excite my imagination.
3.Compared to a living
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Some additional points--
1. A garden has a different relation to a house than the rooms have. The house is the building. Home has more latitude.
2. It might be the content of... which excites. However, content does not create the topics and characters; authors do.
4. In a study, I can surf the Internet, which...' (word order).
1. A garden has a different relation to a house than the rooms have. The house is the building. Home has more latitude.
2. It might be the content of... which excites. However, content does not create the topics and characters; authors do.
4. In a study, I can surf the Internet, which...' (word order).
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