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Kk Posted 21 years ago
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Hello, 

I am not sure whether the four  sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics. 

Can you give me a hand with checking them 

Thank you for your help.

1. What is the principal feature of our city to fascinate people from other areas is various activities.

2. Some juvenile students think of fashionable motorcycle as the best transportation for them to use, the phenomenon seems to deteriorate air pollution.

3. Vehicles emit many toxic substances that are detrimental to people’s health, especially respiratory diseases and lung cancer.

4. What the enterprise owner told journalists about his successful tip is a meticulous plan.
  

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Some possible revisions: 1. What is the principal feature of our city to fascinate people from other areas is various activities. The principal attraction of our city that fascinates visitors from other areas is the variety of the city's activities.

— Davkett

  • Some possible revisions: 1.
  • What is the principal feature of our city to fascinate people from other areas is various activities.
  • The principal attraction of our city that fascinates visitors from other areas is the variety of the city's activities.
  • 2.
  • Some juvenile students think of fashionable motorcycle as the best transportation for them to use, the phenomenon seems to deteriorate air pollution.
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Some possible revisions:

1. What is the principal feature of our city to fascinate people from other areas is various activities.

The principal attraction of our city that fascinates visitors from other areas is the variety of the city's activities.


2. Some juvenile students think of fashionable motorcycle as the best transportation for
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