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Mr. Miller Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Sentence question...

These tools are essential for carpentry jobs, with many of them fitting neatly into a tool belt.

Sounds awkward to me.

Is it correct? or can it be improved..

Thanks...
  

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Hi Mr. Miller This version reads better to me... These tools are essential for carpentry jobs, and many of them can fit neatly into a tool belt.

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  • Miller This version reads better to me...
  • These tools are essential for carpentry jobs, and many of them can fit neatly into a tool belt.
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Hi Mr. Miller

This version reads better to me...

These tools are essential for carpentry jobs, and many of them can fit neatly into a tool belt.
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