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WANG CHUN Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Sentence question

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001.00I see the higher education in perspective. What motivates university students to absorb the scope of knowledge is not for a high grade but for the pursuit of extensive knowledge.00 250-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 00It's hard to edit your sentence without some more context. 02br 02br 01font 00I look at higher education from this perspective. 02font 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00It's hard to edit your sentence without some more context.
  • 02br 02br 01font 00I look at higher education from this perspective.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font00I look at higher education from this perspective. What motivates university students to absorb knowledge is not higher grades but the desire to learn.02font02br
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0And another possible rendering of the second sentence--02br
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01font00What motivates university students is not higher grades but the desire for knowledge.02font0-
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