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WANG CHUN Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Sentence queations. Thank you

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00I am not sure whether these sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics. 02br
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001.00It is true that the part of function of technological advancement increases people’s efficiency so that people has more leisure time. Moreover, the primary objective of technological innovations enables people to improve all aspects of their lives. 02br
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002.It might take people more than half a year to travel from China to the United States by boats in 1901sup00th02sup00 century. It was not until engineers improved the airplane that it takes Chinese tourists twelve hours to arrive in America. 02br
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003.Nowadays, with the development of modern mass transportations, commuters save much traveling time and enjoy more spare time. 02br
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004.With the advent of the Internet, high-speed electronic communication tools enable businessmen from all over the world to attend video conferences at which they can sign their contracts without meeting each other in offices. Video conferences will save these entrepreneurs from the hustle and bustle of long-term expedition. 0-
  

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00It is true that one byproduct of technological advancement is to increase people’s efficiency, so that they have more leisure time. Moreover, the primary objective of technological innovations is to enable people to improve all aspects of their lives. It might have taken people more than half a year to travel from China to the United States by boat in the 1901sup 00th02sup 00 century.

— Clive

  • 00It is true that one byproduct of technological advancement is to increase people’s efficiency, so that they have more leisure time.
  • Moreover, the primary objective of technological innovations is to enable people to improve all aspects of their lives.
  • It might have taken people more than half a year to travel from China to the United States by boat in the 1901sup 00th02sup 00 century.
  • It was not until engineers improved the airplane that Chinese tourists were able to take only twelve hours to arrive in America.
  • Nowadays, with the development of modern mass transportation, commuters save a lot of traveling time and enjoy more spare time.
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