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Ppan Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

sentence proofreading

Hi,

Could someone please help proofread the following sentence?

"In summary, becoming a good leader is a life time learning experience. I am fortunate to have a head start in a very competitive and successful company. I have been looking forward to expanding my experience to lead larger projects and manage multiple teams."

thanks in advance,

/P
  

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Hello Ppan Here's my suggestion: "In summary, becoming a good leader is a life-long learning experience. I am fortunate to have had a head start in a very competitive and successful company. " Other members may have a better solution, though!

— MrPedantic

  • Hello Ppan Here's my suggestion: "In summary, becoming a good leader is a life-long learning experience.
  • I am fortunate to have had a head start in a very competitive and successful company.
  • " Other members may have a better solution, though!
  • MrP
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Hello Ppan

Here's my suggestion:

"In summary, becoming a good leader is a life-long learning experience. I am fortunate to have had a head start in a very competitive and successful company. I am looking forward to expanding my experience by leading larger projects and managing multiple teams."

Other members may have a better solution, though!

MrP
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