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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
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The idea have been haunted ever since it came acrossed my mind. What was the experience like if you went into this country and just be like them for a year. I felt very excited when I made up mind to try it. I do not understand much about them when I watch documentaries on tv or read books.

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The idea had haunted me ever since it crossed my mind: what would the experience be like if I went into this country and just lived like them for a year? I felt very excited when I made up my mind to try it. I do not understand much about them when I only watch documentaries on TV or read books .

— Mister Micawber

  • The idea had haunted me ever since it crossed my mind: what would the experience be like if I went into this country and just lived like them for a year?
  • I felt very excited when I made up my mind to try it.
  • I do not understand much about them when I only watch documentaries on TV or read books .
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The idea had haunted me ever since it crossed my mind: what would the experience be like if I went into this country and just lived like them for a year? I felt very excited when I made up my mind to try it. I do not understand much about them when I only watch documentaries on TV or read books.
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PS: I cast the first sentence in past perfect because now that you have 'made up your mind' you should no longer be 'haunted' by the idea.
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