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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which sentence option is better?
1. In the great chamber in Mithral Hall known as Garumn’s Gorge, Bruenor and Obould soon signed a treaty that ended the fierce war between the two peoples and officially established the Kingdom of Many-Arrows.
2. Soon thereafter, in the great chamber in Mithral Hall known as Garumn’s Gorge, Bruenor and Obould signed a treaty that ended the fierce war between the two peoples and officially established the Kingdom of Many-Arrows.
1. In the great chamber in Mithral Hall known as Garumn’s Gorge, Bruenor and Obould soon signed a treaty that ended the fierce war between the two peoples and officially established the Kingdom of Many-Arrows.
2. Soon thereafter, in the great chamber in Mithral Hall known as Garumn’s Gorge, Bruenor and Obould signed a treaty that ended the fierce war between the two peoples and officially established the Kingdom of Many-Arrows.
Top answer
If when it happened is important, #2 is better. Otherwise, no difference.
- If when it happened is important, #2 is better.
- Otherwise, no difference.
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If when it happened is important, #2 is better. Otherwise, no difference.
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