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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which sentence is a better choice?
1. Later in 422 AC, Galdar was ordered by Sargonnas himself to capture Valthonis, the mortal form of Paladine, and take him to meet Mina.
2. Later in 422 AC, Sargonnas himself ordered Galdar to capture Valthonis, the mortal form of Paladine, and take him to meet Mina.
  

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#2 is probably better because the active voice is often preferable over the passive voice.

  • #2 is probably better because the active voice is often preferable over the passive voice.
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#2 is probably better because the active voice is often preferable over the passive voice.

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