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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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1. The young wizard Palin Majere, Raistlin’s nephew, who had been instrumental in the defeat of Chaos, had received a visitation from "Raistlin" and the mysterious mage "Fizban" in which he had been told him that in this time period, the Age of Mortals, a different magic had to be found.
2. The young wizard Palin Majere, Raistlin’s nephew, who had been instrumental in the defeat of Chaos, had received a visit from "Raistlin" and the mysterious mage "Fizban", who told him that in this time period, the Age of Mortals, a different magic had to be found.
1. The young wizard Palin Majere, Raistlin’s nephew, who had been instrumental in the defeat of Chaos, had received a visitation from "Raistlin" and the mysterious mage "Fizban" in which he had been told him that in this time period, the Age of Mortals, a different magic had to be found.
2. The young wizard Palin Majere, Raistlin’s nephew, who had been instrumental in the defeat of Chaos, had received a visit from "Raistlin" and the mysterious mage "Fizban", who told him that in this time period, the Age of Mortals, a different magic had to be found.
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#2, but had received a visit
- #2, but had received a visit
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