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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which sentence is a better option? FYI- Chaos is the Father of All.
1. Later in the Age of Starbirth, Reorx was tricked by the evil god Hiddukel into creating a gemstone that would help secure neutrality in the world. Within this gemstone, Reorx managed to capture a fragment of the mighty entity known as Chaos, but did not realize that he had actually captured the Father of All himself.
2. Later in the Age of Starbirth, Reorx was tricked by the evil god Hiddukel into creating a gemstone that would help secure neutrality in the world. Within this gemstone, Reorx believed that he had managed to capture a fragment of the mighty entity known as Chaos, but did not realize that he had actually captured the Father of All and of Nothing himself.
1. Later in the Age of Starbirth, Reorx was tricked by the evil god Hiddukel into creating a gemstone that would help secure neutrality in the world. Within this gemstone, Reorx managed to capture a fragment of the mighty entity known as Chaos, but did not realize that he had actually captured the Father of All himself.
2. Later in the Age of Starbirth, Reorx was tricked by the evil god Hiddukel into creating a gemstone that would help secure neutrality in the world. Within this gemstone, Reorx believed that he had managed to capture a fragment of the mighty entity known as Chaos, but did not realize that he had actually captured the Father of All and of Nothing himself.
Top answer
Unless there is later evidence to show that he had not, in fact, managed to capture the fragment, the first is better.
- Unless there is later evidence to show that he had not, in fact, managed to capture the fragment, the first is better.
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Unless there is later evidence to show that he had not, in fact, managed to capture the fragment, the first is better.
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