Which option is a better way to structure the sentence? 1. Following a series of events that were set in motion by a mysterious old man (who was actually an aspect of the god Paladine), Raistlin and his friends were forced to flee the Inn through the kitchen or risk being captured by evil soldiers. 2.Following a series of events that were set in motion by a mysterious old man, who was actually an aspect of the god Paladine, Raistlin and his friends were forced to flee the Inn through the kitchen or risk being captured by evil soldiers.
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#2. In my opinion, brackets are rarely a good idea in formal writing. Clive
— Clive
#2.
In my opinion, brackets are rarely a good idea in formal writing.
Clive
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