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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which sentence is a better choice?
1. After Kitiara told Laurana that she would give the Solamnic forces three days to properly bury their dead, she left the Tower and ordered her army to retreat.
2. After she told Laurana that she would give the Solamnic forces three days to properly bury their dead, Kitiara left the Tower and ordered her army to retreat.
1. After Kitiara told Laurana that she would give the Solamnic forces three days to properly bury their dead, she left the Tower and ordered her army to retreat.
2. After she told Laurana that she would give the Solamnic forces three days to properly bury their dead, Kitiara left the Tower and ordered her army to retreat.
Top answer
#1. I think it's better to mention the person by name before using pronouns to refer to.
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- I think it's better to mention the person by name before using pronouns to refer to.
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#1. I think it's better to mention the person by name before using pronouns to refer to.
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Okay I thought so but thanks a lot. If you don't mind could you please check out my couple other unanswered questions too?
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