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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which sentence is a better option?
1. Porthios journeyed with his father to the second meeting of the Whitestone Council in 352 AC, and there demanded the return of the dragon orb that had been taken from the Qualinesti settlement.
2. Porthios journeyed with his father to the second meeting of the Whitestone Council in 352 AC, during which he demanded the return of the dragon orb that had been taken from the Qualinesti settlement.
1. Porthios journeyed with his father to the second meeting of the Whitestone Council in 352 AC, and there demanded the return of the dragon orb that had been taken from the Qualinesti settlement.
2. Porthios journeyed with his father to the second meeting of the Whitestone Council in 352 AC, during which he demanded the return of the dragon orb that had been taken from the Qualinesti settlement.
Top answer
I'd use #2.
- I'd use #2.
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