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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which sentence is a better option? I want to make it clear that the Council/the quarry is being hunted by Tam's forces.
1. Tam and his spellcasters then used their magic to raise a storm at sea to slow the Council’s flight in order to allow his forces to hunt down their quarry.
2. Tam and his spellcasters then used their magic to raise a storm at sea to slow the Council’s flight in order to allow his forces to hunt them down.
1. Tam and his spellcasters then used their magic to raise a storm at sea to slow the Council’s flight in order to allow his forces to hunt down their quarry.
2. Tam and his spellcasters then used their magic to raise a storm at sea to slow the Council’s flight in order to allow his forces to hunt them down.
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Thanks, is the sentence properly worded with using both 'his' and 'their'?
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