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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Sentence option
Which sentence option is better?
1. Stedd healed Anton and Shinthala of their serious wounds.
2. Stedd healed Anton and Shinthala's serious wounds.
1. Stedd healed Anton and Shinthala of their serious wounds.
2. Stedd healed Anton and Shinthala's serious wounds.
Top answer
#1 has a more epic tone that seems to better suit your writing style.
- #1 has a more epic tone that seems to better suit your writing style.
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They are both correct, but I think the first puts more emphasis on the serious wounds, rather than the fact that the wounds belong to Anton and Shinthala (which is the case in the second sentence). So if you're going for a dangerous mood, I'd pick the first one.
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