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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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The forging of this partnership had Coca-Cola give the WWF a corporation contribution of $20 million, and the conservationists would argue that so generous an amount was this that the WWF has Neville Isdell, former CEO of Cola-Cola, as one of its boardmembers.

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Anonymous Is this OK? No, please simplify it.

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