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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Sentence ok?

On so doing, he sored into the heavens like a bird, a divine angel, and fired himself like a missile into the heart of the now illuminating sphere.

ok? makes sense?
  

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On so doing, he soared into the heavens like a bird or an angel and fired himself like a missile into the heart of the now- illuminating sphere.

  • On so doing, he soared into the heavens like a bird or an angel and fired himself like a missile into the heart of the now- illuminating sphere.
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On so doing, he soared into the heavens like a bird or an angel and fired himself like a missile into the heart of the now-illuminating sphere.

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