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JimmyH Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Sentence making

How would we say that in proper english,

that, this slick ad should not be run on television screens. It has no interesting ideas and makes viewers feel bored.
  

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Your sentence makes sense. It is not incorrect, but a simpler way to say it is: This slick ad should not be on television. It is not interesting; it is boring.

  • Your sentence makes sense.
  • It is not incorrect, but a simpler way to say it is: This slick ad should not be on television.
  • It is not interesting; it is boring.
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Your sentence makes sense. It is not incorrect, but a simpler way to say it is:

This slick ad should not be on television. It is not interesting; it is boring.

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