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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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Sentence: in this project...
could you please check the grammar of this sentence.
In this project, I conducted face to face interviews with six fathers recruited through friends and family and via snowball sampling.
In this project, I conducted face to face interviews with six fathers recruited through friends and family and via snowball sampling.
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Just a bit of word-order revision, and some hyphens: In this project, I conducted face-to-face interviews with six fathers recruited, via snowball sampling, through friends and family. 'Through friends and family' may be redundant of 'snowball sampling'. In this project, I conducted face-to-face interviews with six fathers recruited through snowball sampling.
- Just a bit of word-order revision, and some hyphens: In this project, I conducted face-to-face interviews with six fathers recruited, via snowball sampling, through friends and family.
- 'Through friends and family' may be redundant of 'snowball sampling'.
- In this project, I conducted face-to-face interviews with six fathers recruited through snowball sampling.
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Just a bit of word-order revision, and some hyphens:
In this project, I conducted face-to-face interviews with six fathers recruited, via snowball sampling, through friends and family.
'Through friends and family' may be redundant of 'snowball sampling'.
In this project, I conducted face-to-face interviews with six fathers recruited, via snowball sampling, through friends and family.
'Through friends and family' may be redundant of 'snowball sampling'.
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