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Turnem Posted 17 years ago
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Sentence III
I need a help with this sentence, thanks a lot:
What was left as a result of all this was a mystery from not knowing is it the idea I have remembered better or worse than the one I have lost, seemingly, forever?
Is it ok, or I need to improve it. Thanks so much.
What was left as a result of all this was a mystery from not knowing is it the idea I have remembered better or worse than the one I have lost, seemingly, forever?
Is it ok, or I need to improve it. Thanks so much.
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It isn't exactly perfect as it is. I have no idea what you want to say, so it's impossible to suggest improvements. CB
- It isn't exactly perfect as it is.
- I have no idea what you want to say, so it's impossible to suggest improvements.
- CB
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It isn't exactly perfect as it is. I have no idea what you want to say, so it's impossible to suggest improvements.
CB
CB
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Ok here is the wider context:
Last night I got two good ideas coming to my mind, ideas that could have been used for curing some of my writing neuroses – as an ingredient in a short story or a blog post or something, but I was too lazy to make some notes about it. As a consequence, in the morning, I was able to recall only one of these ideas. What was left as a result of all this was a
Last night I got two good ideas coming to my mind, ideas that could have been used for curing some of my writing neuroses – as an ingredient in a short story or a blog post or something, but I was too lazy to make some notes about it. As a consequence, in the morning, I was able to recall only one of these ideas. What was left as a result of all this was a
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