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Apprentice123 Posted 10 years ago
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Is my sentence correct?

After did check-in in the hotel and tool a shower, my girlfriend and I started our walking journey to the Times Square.
  

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After checking in at the hotel and taking a shower, my girlfriend and I started our walking journey to Times Square.

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  • After checking in at the hotel and taking a shower, my girlfriend and I started our walking journey to Times Square.
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After checking in at the hotel and taking a shower, my girlfriend and I started our walking journey to Times Square.
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Apprentice123started our walking journey to the Times Square.
This is a bit wordy and unnatural. It would be simpler as: walked to Times Square.
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