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Watermelon2 Posted 11 years ago
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Sentence Help

Could you please help me rewrite this sentence into a good English. I feel that it a bad one: "The loan, combined with the income from her husband who worked as a construction worker, was used to buy zincs, plain wood for walls and other necessary construction materials to build her own house."
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The loan, combined with the income from her husband, who worked as a construction worker, was used to buy zinc, wood, and other construction material for her house.

— Mister Micawber

  • The loan, combined with the income from her husband, who worked as a construction worker, was used to buy zinc, wood, and other construction material for her house.
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The loan, combined with the income from her husband, who worked as a construction worker, was used to buy zinc, wood, and other construction material for her house.
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thanks a lot for your help
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