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Watermelon2 Posted 11 years ago
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Sentence help

Hi Sir,

I have another problem building this sentence. I am not sure it is correct or not, if you could help me, it is great: " When my two children graduated and they found a job, my living standard will be improved one more level up"

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I would say this: When my two children have graduated and found themselves (suitable) jobs, the standard of my living will have improved a little.

— Vsuresh

  • I would say this: When my two children have graduated and found themselves (suitable) jobs, the standard of my living will have improved a little.
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I would say this:
When my two children have graduated and found themselves (suitable) jobs, the standard of my living will have improved a little.
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When my two children graduate and find jobs, my living standard will improve.
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AlpheccaStarsWhen my two children graduate and find jobs, my living standard will improve.
It sounds simple and easy.

Could you tell me if the use of present perfect and future perfect does not agree with the intended meaning the OP wants to convey?
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Thank you very much your help, everyone.
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vsureshCould you tell me if the use of present perfect and future perfect does not agree with the intended meaning the OP wants to convey?
Something seems wrong with the combination of present perfect and future perfect, perhaps the aspect of duration.I'll have to think about it.
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