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Wochnick Posted 15 years ago
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Can you help me with this sentence? I have a co-worker that writes these quotes up and I have to type them up on letter head....
The following proposal is for fifty one workstations using Concensys modular products and Performa seating plus steel bookcases and storage cabinets plus tables in the Clean Diesel Project 10-Plex.
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The following proposal is for fifty one workstations using Concensys modular products, Performa seating, steel bookcases, storage cabinets and tables in the Clean Diesel Project 10-Plex.
The following proposal is for fifty one workstations using Concensys modular products and Performa seating plus steel bookcases and storage cabinets plus tables in the Clean Diesel Project 10-Plex.
My version:
The following proposal is for fifty one workstations using Concensys modular products, Performa seating, steel bookcases, storage cabinets and tables in the Clean Diesel Project 10-Plex.
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Hyphenate "fifty one," otherwise this looks good. If you want to specific steel storage cabinets, I would add that modifer. The following proposal is for fifty - one workstations using Concensys modular products, Performa seating, steel bookcases, (steel) storage cabinets and tables in the Clean Diesel Project 10-Plex.
- Hyphenate "fifty one," otherwise this looks good.
- If you want to specific steel storage cabinets, I would add that modifer.
- The following proposal is for fifty - one workstations using Concensys modular products, Performa seating, steel bookcases, (steel) storage cabinets and tables in the Clean Diesel Project 10-Plex.
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Hyphenate "fifty one," otherwise this looks good. If you want to specific steel storage cabinets, I would add that modifer.
The following proposal is for fifty-one workstations using Concensys modular products, Performa seating, steel bookcases, (steel) storage cabinets and tables in the Clean Diesel Project 10-Plex.
The following proposal is for fifty-one workstations using Concensys modular products, Performa seating, steel bookcases, (steel) storage cabinets and tables in the Clean Diesel Project 10-Plex.
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Thanks Doctor D. I was not the best in school, but I knew I came much closer to being correct. 
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