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According to Hobbes when two men, in this case two companies, desire the same outcome “which they cannot both enjoy, they become enemies” and consequently, major companies often times compete to obtain the best customer service in order to distance themselves from similar companies. In the current times advances in technology seem to establish the idea that new technology creates a more highly developed and exceptional service (Hobbes Ch. XIII).

Communication over the web has ruled out all other forms of communication because it’s extreme strategy of removing people from the communication process..