0
Rahul11 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Sentence Guidance

Hi Experts:-

Can you please check the following sentence:-

"His father advises him to expose himself to wider array of experiences to grow as an individual."

I feel that there are too many "to" in this sentence,is there another way to construct it or do you approve of it in the current form?

Looking forward for your guidance.

Thanks in advance.

Rahul
  

Top answer

" It’s fine with the article added above. Alternatively, His father advises that he expose himself to a wider array of experiences to grow as an individual.

— RandomGuy

  • " It’s fine with the article added above.
  • Alternatively, His father advises that he expose himself to a wider array of experiences to grow as an individual.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
rahul11His father advises him to expose himself to a wider array of experiences to grow as an individual."
It’s fine with the article added above.

Alternatively,

His father advises that he expose himself to a wider array of experiences to grow as an individual.
0

Related Questions