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Akdom Posted 17 years ago
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1. Being promoted to a lavish office at the top floor of the firm motivates him more psychologically than materialistically.



2. Studying at Harvard and being immersed in its culture have influenced him more politically than in terms of academia.



3. The pressures and ordeals in his tours to haven’t convert him into a pessimistic. They have only hardened Schwartz’s will and belief that everyday you should offer a little good to this world of evil, and the metals meant something to him more spiritually than in the sense of getting reorganization in the Military.


Thanks a million in advance.
  

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1. and 2. , you took a bigger bite.

  • 1.
  • and 2.
  • , you took a bigger bite.
  • << 3.
  • The pressures and ordeals in his tours to Iraq haven’t convert converted him into / to a pessimistic pessimist .
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1. and 2. are pretty smooth, but on 3., you took a bigger bite.

<< 3. The pressures and ordeals in his tours to Iraq haven’t convert converted him into / to a pessimistic pessimist. They have only hardened Schwartz’s will and belief that everyday you should offer a little good to this world of evil, evil. and the metal
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akdom and the metals meant something to him more spiritually than in the sense of getting reorganization in the Military.
[And] His medals mean more to him spiritually than as symbols of his military achievements.

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