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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Sentence Gramma

Please kindly note this booking was made for Jay's business trip, who is the head of our company.
May I know if this sentence is correct?
  

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It needs a few changes. Please note (that) this booking was made for Jay's business trip. He is the head of our company

— Vsuresh

  • It needs a few changes.
  • Please note (that) this booking was made for Jay's business trip.
  • He is the head of our company
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It needs a few changes.

Please note (that) this booking was made for Jay's business trip. He is the head of our company
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Anonymous Please kindly note this booking was made for Jay's business trip, who is the head of our company. May I know if this sentence is correct?
I suggest: Please note that this booking was made for a business trip by Jay, head of our company.
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