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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Sentence formulation help needed

Hi,english is not my native language and i'm looking for someone who can tell me if the following sentence can be used as the title for a website article.

-- The 10 Dangers of Skiing and Their Prevention

Is it "normal" english to mention the prevention like that? "their prevention" or should i try to formulate it differently?

I appreciate any help i can get, thanks.

Higgins
  

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Anonymous The 10 Dangers of Skiing and Their Prevention Is it "normal" english to mention the prevention like that? No. Grammatically it would be better to use: The 10 Dangers of Skiing and How to Prevent Them However, danger is a property of a situation.

  • Anonymous The 10 Dangers of Skiing and Their Prevention Is it "normal" english to mention the prevention like that?
  • No.
  • Grammatically it would be better to use: The 10 Dangers of Skiing and How to Prevent Them However, danger is a property of a situation.
  • If a danger exists it hasn't been prevented.
  • To prevent something is to stop it from happening beforehand.
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AnonymousThe 10 Dangers of Skiing and Their Prevention Is it "normal" english to mention the prevention like that?
No. Grammatically it would be better to use:

The 10 Dangers of Skiing and How to Prevent Them

However, danger is a property of a situation. If a danger exists it hasn't been prevented. To prevent something is to stop it from h

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