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Rcteja Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Sentence formation.inception.

"that's why i'm telling you,if you too much like inception movie you will create a world in your dreams,then u travel around in that world.it leads to insomina."

is this the right sentence?please tell me any mistakes i have done.
  

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Hello, rcteja – and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix the problems and post your revised sentence here.

  • Hello, rcteja – and welcome to English Forums.
  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please fix the problems and post your revised sentence here.
  • it leads to insomina.
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Hello, rcteja – and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix the problems and post your revised sentence here.

that's why i'm telling you,if you too much like inception movie you will create a world in your dreams,then u travel around in that world.it leads to insomina.
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that is why i am telling you, if u like the inception movie much you will create your own world in your dreams, then you travel around in that world. it leads to insomnia.
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that is why i am telling you, if u like the inception movie much you will create your own world in your dreams, then you travel around in that world. it leads to insomnia.

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