Sentence flow/grammar check
So I'm trying to come up with a sentence that includes the basic activities done but I don't want to make it sound "dry" as to "I went here, and did this and that..." you know what I mean.
The following sentence is probably incomplete and need some help with that and grammar. Any corrections are appreciated.
"From going on long hikes in the woods and mountains to being able to witness the stunning views of the American Rockies, to being able to see the Moose from very close, and good company - it was all worth it."
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The structure from . . . . to . . . . works best when you are just talking about two things.
In your text, I'd say
eg Going on long hikes in the woods and mountains, witnessing the stunning views of the American Rockies, seeing a moose from very close up, enjoying good company - it was all worth it.
Your use of the dash makes this seem casual in tone. That
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