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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Sentence flow and wording
Do these two sentences flow correctly, particularly with the use of 'that belief' to refer to the first sentence? FYI- Steel was Sara's son.
Ansalon needed a counterweight to the Knighthoods of Takhisis and Solamnia, a brotherhood of warriors who remembered that honor and unity must serve the good of the common people of Ansalon. Sara decided to a found a new knightly order dedicated to that belief and named the organization the Legion of Steel in Steel’s honor.
Ansalon needed a counterweight to the Knighthoods of Takhisis and Solamnia, a brotherhood of warriors who remembered that honor and unity must serve the good of the common people of Ansalon. Sara decided to a found a new knightly order dedicated to that belief and named the organization the Legion of Steel in Steel’s honor.
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It works.
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