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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Sentence flow
Do these two sentence properly flow, particularly with the use of 'soon'?
The group escaped from Solace after a brief encounter with goblins and began to journey south to the city of Haven, but they were attacked on the road by a band of strange clerics who revealed themselves to be draconians. The companions soon entered Darken Wood and met its unicorn guardian, the Forestmaster, who sent them to the ruined city of Xak Tsaroth to recover the Disks of Mishakal.
The group escaped from Solace after a brief encounter with goblins and began to journey south to the city of Haven, but they were attacked on the road by a band of strange clerics who revealed themselves to be draconians. The companions soon entered Darken Wood and met its unicorn guardian, the Forestmaster, who sent them to the ruined city of Xak Tsaroth to recover the Disks of Mishakal.
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The group escaped from Solace after a brief encounter with goblins and began to journey south to the city of Haven, but they were attacked on the road by a band of strange clerics who revealed themselves to be draconians. The companions soon entered Darken Wood and met its unicorn guardian, the Forestmaster, who sent them to the ruined city of Xak Tsaroth to recover the Disks of Mishakal. I would start the first sentence with After a brief encounter...
- The group escaped from Solace after a brief encounter with goblins and began to journey south to the city of Haven, but they were attacked on the road by a band of strange clerics who revealed themselves to be draconians.
- The companions soon entered Darken Wood and met its unicorn guardian, the Forestmaster, who sent them to the ruined city of Xak Tsaroth to recover the Disks of Mishakal.
- I would start the first sentence with After a brief encounter...
- I'm not certain of the result of the attack by the draconians.
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cboutin3 Do these two sentence properly flow, particularly with the use of 'soon'?The group escaped from Solace after a brief encounter with goblins and began to journey south to the city of Haven, but they were attacked on the road by a band of strange clerics who revealed themselves to be draconians. The companions soon entered Darken Wood and met its unicorn guardian,
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